Friday, 31 July 2015
Thursday, 30 July 2015
Revising writing
Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we have been focusing on the D.D stands for delete.
In my class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here is my piece of writing.
In my class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here is my piece of writing.
Miss Paton’s copy
Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
My copy
Miss Paton has a cat.his name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish. He come to my house starving. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch.Oscar don’t like to sit on my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
Wednesday, 29 July 2015
Tuesday, 28 July 2015
Friday, 24 July 2015
Inside my lunch box
What’s in my lunch box?
Is your lunch a healthy lunch? Why / Why Not?
What was the healthiest? Apple and mandarin
What was the least healthy and why? apple because it is one
What is missing from your lunch box?I missing a sandwich, meat, vegetables and fruit.
My lunch is not healthy because the chips are salty.The apple and mandrin are healthy because they give you energy.
This is my lunch and it is not healthy but my apple is good.
Wednesday, 22 July 2015
Monday, 20 July 2015
Friday, 3 July 2015
My Dance Reflection.
Aung Naing
Term2:Friday 3 July
We have to choose one of the brother in the book and we have to make 4 shapes, we have to choose a partner.Put your 2 shapes with your partner, your partner have to choose 2 of you 4 shapes.
We choose partner and we play manek and you partner have to following your hand it’s hard to reach the hand because they put there hand is too high because there are tall.
Thursday, 2 July 2015
Wednesday, 1 July 2015
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