Aung Naing @ Panmure Bridge School: September 2015

Friday, 11 September 2015

This is my argument on: Should Panmure Bridge School have a Swimming Pool? Me and Najib worked as a team to complete this piece of writing.

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Introduction State what you are arguing about State your opinion For or Against	My Argument is should we have a swimming pool at Panmure Bridge School. We are for having a swimming pool at Panmure bridge School because it provides water skills for the kids.
Reason 1 learning Supportive details	We like swimming pool because you can learn how to swim and you can be good at swimming. In the Swimming pool you can have a racing competition with your friends in the Swimming pool, and you could also play in the swimming pool. Swimming is good for your body to get lots of exercise. I like swimming because you can learn better.
Reason 2 Playing with friends Supportive details	In the holidays some swimming pools might be closed. Instead of waiting for the pools to open you could come to the Panmure Bridge School swimming pool and have fun playing with your friends and your family.
Reason 3 family Supportive details	If you don’t spend time with your family you can go to the Panmure Bridge School swimming pool and swim together. Your family will have a great time if you come and swim during the holidays at Panmure Bridge School pool.
Conclusion	Therefore I think there should be a swimming pool at Panmure Bridge School because it helps us to learn to swim. Also you can have games with your friends.