I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Friday, 30 October 2015
My Recount
Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
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Wow!!!!!! I was so excited to went to the Mt Albert wave pool first we went to the kfc and we ate at a table I got was chips, potato Shmat. after we ate at kfc we went to wave pools.
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Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How
Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs
Write in the past tense
Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings
Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia
Use connectives
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When we went inside the wave pool we got changed and we went inside the wave pool there were so many waves. Then I went on the water side. It was so dark in the water slide. Then we went in the hot pool to. Rest after the hot pool we say at the wave pool at 7.00 o’clock.We went to the pak'nsave to buy sauce, ham, cheese and we make a pizza at sam's house in my pizza was ham, cheese after we eat the pizza we play a game call uno , the big people win all the time I am bad at uno after that we hug tobe the dog
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Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.
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and we went home to sleep.
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Writing
Thursday, 29 October 2015
Wednesday, 28 October 2015
Friday, 23 October 2015
Wednesday, 21 October 2015
Tuesday, 20 October 2015
Monday, 19 October 2015
My Recount
Wow! On Sunday Oh’smar came to my house and we
play basketball.When we finish play basketball we eat chips
then we play outside to play soccer tournament I got 5
goals but my brother got 6 goal ,Oh’smar got 8 goal When we finished.
We play handball Oh’smar got 10 point but a got 5 point, my brother got 7 point at the end Oh’smar went home.We went to panke save,my mum buy me a ice block, then we went to buy some food for my lunch.
This is my Recount about my weekend
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Writing
Friday, 16 October 2015
Structure of a recount by AungNaing
I have been learning to write a recount is that in can capture the audience and I have been learning to write a orientation that covers: When,where,who,how and why.
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Writing
Wednesday, 14 October 2015
Tuesday, 13 October 2015
Art reflection
Art Still Life Reflection
- What are you most pleased with? Why / why not?
I am pleased with my painting because it looks so good.
2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I learnt how to blend the colours.
3. What did you find easy?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I found out that painting the fruit was easy.
4. What did you find difficult?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I found the background difficult because we had to make two colours.
5. Who did helped you with your still life painting?
Miss Paton helped me with the painting.
6. What would you change? why / why not?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I would change the fruit. I would draw the grapes.
7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time?
I will work hard by doing good painting.
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Inquiry
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