Recount

Dancing through the decades 

Last week on Wednesday in the evening Panmure Bridge performed in the hall and it started at 6:30.On Thursday we perform at 6:30 and on Wednesday evening, the first thing we did was getting change into the outfit when we got in our outfit we had to wait a couple minutes to go inside of the hall and for kappa aka , pacific they had to go in the library to get change to the dance outfit for our school dance of the kappa aka,pacific.    

When we done having a little rest I said this,”I am so nervous.”We went to the hall and sit and there was Lyndon live and then in our line we wait into the performed start and when it start a video plays on the projector and when the video is done.Room 4 and 2 went on the stage and performed they dance and all of the people was laughing and then when room 4 finished they had to get off the stage quickly and then the senior kappa aka went onto the stage to perform and then when they done room one went up on the stage and the video plays on the projector and when they done.The journal kappa aka went up on the stage and when they done room 5 went up on the stage and then there were laughing like this,”aha.” then lS2 went up on the stage and then room 5 went up on the stage and then lS1 we up the stage after that we the pacific went up on the stage and then when the pacific done.

We went back to class to change when we done changing we went to our parent to go home and I said,”It was fun.”.

L.I to use tree in our recount.
For writing we did recount and then we had to edit it to make our recount better and we had to cheek if we are on the right level for Punctuation, Vocab, Sentence Structure, Structure and Language.